Friday, November 27, 2009


Maximum city …. AND FOUND


This post would make lot of people very happy especially those who love the maya nagri Mumbai. After a long struggle of almost 3 years, I feel that the city has accepted me, I don’t feel a stranger here anymore. I can now identify with the crowd, the food, the breeze, the places….


I have started observing things closely here and wish to share some of my observations with all of you.
Firstly, it’s a very safe place for girls. There has been times when I have returned home quite late but there is no fear or apprehensions because you will find millions of people on the street at even late hours. Living in the ‘stare-free’ world instills a kind of independence in oneself.


Secondly, the train journey, I feel I can do a P.H.D. in it; it is like a new story everyday unfolding
layers of some known and some unknown facets of life.
(Though 4 hours traveling everyday gets on your nerves at times).
Everyone traveling by train has his/her train fixed in the morning, I too have but at times I take a different train just to break the monotony of commuting with the same faces. But as soon as I step in the new train, I feel like an alien and start to miss my co-passengers from my usual train. And when next morning I return to my regular train I get glances and smiles from my co-passengers implicitly asking me “where were you yesterday?” there is always an assurance that you are not alone.
The journey has also re-united me with two best friends- book and music which I was robbed off during the last two years.


Thirdly, it is a very romantic city. Sitting at Marine Drive feeling the scented breeze makes everyone sitting their embraced by the god of love.. And the icing on the cake are the kids selling red roses, they make the work easier by pestering the couple to buy roses. The place is also the abode of the famous buggi ride !!. So all you Rajs and Simarans out there, it a must place for all the dilwalllas !!


Fourthly, innumerous reasons to leave office early. I am sure you all have heard the song ‘yeh Mumbai sheher haadson ka sheher hai’ . this song is so true, there is always something or the other happening here- cyclone alert, political issue, social issue you name it, we have it !!. These news come as a blessing in disguise to people like me who wants to get out of the closed walls of the office and feel the fresh air.
So these are some reasons which make Mumbai a happening and special place.
But this doesn’t mean that I have lost feelings for my first love, Dilli. Infact I am fortunate to experience lives of two of the most beautiful and happening cities in India.


Would like to end my post with few lines…


I love the rains here but miss the winters there….


I love the sea here but miss the terrace there….


I love the bhel here but miss the golgappa there!!


8 comments:

  1. I love the ending verse!!! perfectly captured the entire essence.. of being torn between two lands.. the charm of "mayeka and sasuraal"
    Perfect!!!
    You missed a line..
    I love the boys here, but i miss my girls there... :D

    Love u.. see you very soon...
    Tell the city that i am coming..
    xoxo
    ramladoo!

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  2. Hey!! ...

    great read, yet again! ... with ur description, i can almost feel the breeze, and almost taste the salty water at the beach.. etc etc ...and yeah, long distance travel does take one back to books (music i dunno.. never been a music lover) ...
    And yeah, tho I know Mumbai is supposed to be much safer for girls. Even from all personal accounts of friends. Somehow, for some reason, I have never personally felt any harrassment as a woman, any more than my understanding of the nature and scale of it all across India. Dunno Why...

    And oh, nice poem :) .. simple and captures every idea precisely :D .. i love the last line .. u missing the golgappas.. i now feel guilty that i cud never treat u to any, all those times when we used to plan it ... my aggarwal sweets makes the BEST ones in town :)

    love,

    Tutu

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  3. * correction..

    Somehow, for some reason, I have never personally felt any harassment as a woman in Delhi, any more than my understanding of the nature and scale of it all across India.

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  4. That was a perfect description of a city which I lately started liking though still in dreams, all based on the description/ stories of the city heard from u and our IMI frnds in Mumbai.
    Ive been there twice, once when I was in 4th and didnt know how the world was. And recently when in IMI.
    Every time I now hear of this city from any one, it simply reminds me of few of these adjectives:
    Independence (as also expressed in ur post),
    Freedom,
    Ambition to do some thing different even though it might be simple,
    The satisfaction in every small success.
    And most of all the courage to show the world that you are different.
    I guess thats a mixture of how I now look at this city of possibilities.
    And ur poem is simply cute :) I am inspired...

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  5. Dhuut yaar..u missed out something very very impt..The Girls re!!..hehe
    Jokes apart..fabulous post..loved it..
    and yeah ab bahut tareef ho gayi Mumbai ki..give it a break..bechara blush karne laga hoga ab toh :)))..
    had to end with these legendary words..
    "i love the girls here but i also miss them there" :P

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  6. @All:Thank you guys for your encouraging words, they keep me going !!
    @Meggu:babes, you are always the first one to leave a comment on my post, thanies thankies..n ya I def miss the gals, but I am happy that my gals are coming soonest !!
    @Tutu:my description of the maya nagri can not even match upto ur gannaland..but ya i am trying..
    you should feel guilty, I cant even count the no of times I have asked for a golgappa treat from you :(..its still due !!
    @Ranjhore k Rathore: You need to come here once again to discover more, and plz change the settings of your blog, I cant leave a comment on it..I simply loved your last post, made me miss Dilli terriblli...
    @Mangu: I have to love the girls here cos despite me being with the guys here..all of your eyes are on the parayi gals only (my badluck!!)...though I am still trying to explore the unknown(read back) side of it !!

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  8. Here is Kari again with so simple, serene yet easiest to grasp words...MsK the best things about your words are that the make a great visualization of every sentence you write...and that too crispy clear picture with a great feel. Ab isse acha kya likha jayega ek Haadson ke Sahar ke baare mein..ye he Maximum hei Mumbai ke liye..... The last sentence contains whole essence and we can pic our both cities and create the one with Terrace+ Sea...the one with GolGappa+Bhel...and the season with Rain+Winters....You must not stop writing ever as your words gives a great treat to read for every one...after all You gives Every one .. A REASON TO CATCH A SMILE.........

    Love you so much
    Yours

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